Can you help me fix my poem??! PLEASEEEEEEE? - light bulbs unlimited
~ Personifing knowledge "should be" ~
I know.
My mother is the brain
My father is -----
My enemy is stupidity
My best friend is the consciousness
Oh, I do the wheels in motion
Watch is like the light bulb
I'm still growing
I'm like a weapon
For better or for worse, could be used
My power is unlimited
I'm as hard as you leave me
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I am as strong as your heart
I am aware
can fill the spaces.
(Review of something else, if you have suggestions)
I need all the help we can get
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Thursday, January 21, 2010
Light Bulbs Unlimited Can You Help Me Fix My Poem??! PLEASEEEEEEE?
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The wisdom of my father, if he does not celebrate it. Try to be this will help.
ReplyDeleteI know.
ReplyDeleteBreast thoughts
Aware of my birth.
Ignorance is my enemy
struggling with consciousness.
Oh, I do the wheels in motion
Watch is like the light bulb
I'm still growing
As a weapon, I Sharp
For better or for worse
With unlimited power
You can limit
Become one with me
I am stronger than your heart
I am aware
What happens .......
ReplyDelete1. Verse:
I am aware
My mother's intelligence
My father is a logical
My enemy is ignorance
My best friend is the consciousness
Last stanza:
I've changed
I am as strong as your heart
I am aware
1) Books
ReplyDelete2) not about me, as with other wishdom --------------